Well not really 'a day'. In fact it doesn't specify which day. Just "A DAY". You will get a 'thought' when there is one worth getting. Maybe I should rename the site "Try to have a thought a day" YOU CAN HAVE 'MARKETING THOUGHT A DAY' RSS FEEDBLITZ EMAILED TO YOU BY VISITING WWW.MICHAELKIELYMARKETING.COM.AU AND SIGNING ON FOR THE SERVICE. (Not every day, thought. You won't ready them all.)

Wednesday, July 11, 2007

"Does your website suck?"

What do Australia's best copywriters think is good copy? I Googled "copywriting services australia" and looked at the headlines used by those copywriters who chose to advertise on this page.

I'll pas judgement on them, then contact the writer to see if their ad is working for them...

Let's look at the copy:

Does your website suck?
Compelling copy can make all
the difference to your bottom line.
www.TinaWrites.com

(Tina, it sucks but I don't want you to remind me. Make me feel better, not worse.)

Need a writer in a hurry?
Urgent deadlines? No problem.
David Said, Writing Freelance.
writingfreelance.com.au

(David, You can't project an image of quality if you focus on speed.)

Corporate Video Experts
Promotional, advertising, event &
training videos. Rural expertise.
anvilmedia.com.au

(WHat are you guys doing here?)

Expensive Copywriting
We get high fees & are still booked
solid. See samples/results.
www.ProfitBoostersCopy.com

(I like this reverse approach.)

Copywriting Services
Professional copywriting services.
Brochures, newsletters, print ads.
www.actionwords.com.au

(Hohum)

Business Writing
Total copywriting service. Direct
mail, ads, brochures - anything!
www.wellsaid.net.au
New South Wales

(Well said)

Copywriter That Sells
"Give Me a Chance to Send You This
Free Report and I'll Prove It"
www.CopyWritingThatSells.com.au

(Classic offer approach)

Copywriting Magic
Highly trained copywriter
gets mega-results for your business
www.overnight-copy.com

(Nice use of promise)

The winner: "Expensive copy." Gutsy. CLever. That's what I want.

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